How I Wrote An 80,000 Word Medical Thriller in 36 Days (The Gamma Sequence)

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Yep. Gang, I wrote an 80,000 word medical thriller novel in 36 days.

And it’s really good!

I was once again invited to contribute a novel for a box set with a group of USA Today bestselling authors and New York Times bestselling authors.

The Gamma Sequence (a.k.a. Kill Switch, its working title) was started the morning of February 26, 2019

by kicking around medical thriller plot ideas with some author friends.

By 8pm the next day, I’d sent Jenifer Ruff the first chapter of the story to review.

15 days later, I had written 17 chapters and 36,969 words of my first medical thriller,

with roughly 12 plot points to go and a goal of finishing the first draft by the end of Spring Break, Sunday March 24th. (At that time, I estimated the final length to come in at around 60,000 – 65,000 words, it seemed it would be completed in about 26 days—just over 3 ½ weeks.)

I finished writing the book on April 3 at 11:15pm, 82,000 words in 36 days, just over 5 weeks.

Whaaat???

I know!

Now it needs to rest for a week so I can look at it with fresh eyes, and then I’ll be ready for beta readers to have a look at it.

If you’d like to be a beta reader for this one, let me know!

Here’s the tag line and blurb (subject to change based on beta reader feedback):

Tag line:

The Gamma Sequence

Some secrets are too big remain hidden.

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possible cover idea

Blurb:

Geneticist Lanaya Kim must do what authorities haven’t: tie together the “accidental” deaths of several prominent scientists around the country to show they were actually murdered. Over the past two years, geneticists have died in what appear to be accidents, but Lanaya knows otherwise. If she tells her secrets to the authorities, she risks becoming a suspect in the crimes, a problem that Angelus Genetics wants squashed, or revealing herself to the killer and becoming his next target. Hiring private investigator Hamilton DeShear may help her expose the truth, but time is running out. The murders are happening faster, and Lanaya’s name is next on the killer’s list, but what they end up discovering is more horrifying than either of them could ever have imagined. (116 words)

 

So, how did I do it?

And what happened as a result?

Well, one result was I wrote an awesome medical thriller.

Before I started the project, I wondered if I’d be able to get it done in time. The box set required a novel by early May 2019, and I was talking about the idea in late February 2019! But my 90,000 word murder mystery Double Blind was written in six weeks, so I knew it was possible. Many people think Double Blind is my best work.

I knew I could write 30,000 words in six or eight weeks, but…

I had my Young Authors Clubs getting ready to finish their books, which I read, edit, and format for publishing; and I had two editing projects waiting, so that was gonna be a big time consideration—plus, I didn’t know enough about the medical thriller genre to be certain I’d deliver what the fans of the genre expected. I had to finish a solid story with enough time to let it rest before I started revising it myself, then have time for beta readers, then incorporate their input – and still submit it in early May as required.

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another possible cover

Allowing for a month for beta readers to read and review, and a week of rest before a week of my own revisions, that ate 6 weeks of a short calendar. It was due in May and it was already late February. Half of that window was closed.

I kicked around an outline for a while and thought I had something good down that I could follow, so I started in.

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and yet another possible cover

THE “HOW” part 1

After a few days or a week, I thought I’d be able to knock out 30,000 words or more, no problem (the box set required a book of at least 30,000 words). I was excited to start, so to create extra time to get it done, I got up at 4AM every day and wrote for 2 – 2 1/2 hours before anyone else was awake. If you can do that five days a week, you’ll have 12 ½ hours of quiet writing time, PLUS whatever else you can get, like 3-4 hours on a Saturday or whatever. Because it was a short window, I also wrote in the evenings and on weekends. There was a problem that resulted from that, which I’ll address in a moment.

After 15 days I was about 30,000 words in and thought the story would it up around 60,000.

Probably a week after that, maybe two, I felt like I was slogging through the mushy middle. My critique partner was sending back chapters saying that she wasn’t maintaining interest as much, too. That was chapter 24 and 25, which will be shortened and revised. TIP: when it’s tough, keep going. You can’t revise what’s not written, and sometimes the chapters are hard to write because the author is addressing story elements that the end reader won’t need. That means the rough spot might be able to come out and not be missed.

(Above, more possible covers.)

As recently as seven days before I finished, I still felt like I was struggling with a few things. I had an ending for the main bad guy, and an ending for the secondary bad guy, and how I intended for everybody else to ride off into the sunset, but getting the three things to come together was tough. I just couldn’t visualize it in my mind. Ultimately I just started writing, figuring it will come together, and if not I’ll revise it. TIP: Get AN ending, then worry about THE ending.

THE “HOW” part 2

Ya gotta outline. Then you have a fun writing prompt every day, you know what to do, and you see your progress. Without an outline, this book absolutely doesn’t get done in 36 days. The outline doesn’t have to be all the details, but it had to have broad strokes. James Patterson says most “writers block” comes from not having an outline, and I agree. Another tip: try to get your entire chapter done in the 2 1/2 hours that day, or about 1 chapter a day. It’ll force you to keep the story moving, and as long as you write well, it’ll read well, too. TIP: Aim for chapters that are 2000 words or less, and go longer when it’s required. You can make your point in 1500 words and move on.

Now that it’s complete, I’m not sure what I was worried about

for two of those three final items. I figured out how to segue the two bad guys, and the ending is complete. It’s not completely polished yet, but it’s solid and it’s satisfying. It needs more splashes of emotion, and a few other tweaks, but it’s done and it’s good.

So what did I think?

I think when you dedicate yourself to a project like this, it takes a lot of time and all of a sudden six weeks have gone by and you haven’t done anything outside your office.

I think I tend to get more tired than I realize when I work from 4AM and use every waking hour to write – evenings, weekends, etc. – it’s okay to do but it doesn’t happen in a vacuum. I get short tempered at times when I’m doing a whole book this way. Midway through, lots of people were noticing. My wife, for sure, but also my daughter, my critique partners, and probably friends or others who noticed but didn’t say anything. So I had to scale back. There were a few vacation days in there, but also a root canal. (I was smart enough to not attempt to write while on the pain killers.)

I think the revision process adds a lot of flavor and depth that isn’t consistently there in the first draft, and it’s important to do, but when you’re up and running and trying to establish a fast pace, writing fast and not getting bogged down in too much detail is good. All that depth may not be needed at every stage of the game, but after letting it rest and seeing it with fresh eyes, you’ll add what’s needed. If a CP says it feels rushed in places, or needs emotion added, or reads thin, you’ll fix it.

Finally, I think it’ll do well as a standalone, but I’m gonna consider whether I can break it into two parts and have it be part 1 and 2 of its own series, or if it has the ability to launch a series.

A few weeks ago, I thought the completed 80,000 word manuscript could be the start of a series.

Now that it’s done, I may be too tired to see four or five more books coming out of it.

And I can’t think of a good place to break it in two and have it be two books, so for now it’s going to stay one book.

Again, if you’d like to read The Gamma Sequence as a beta reader

or when it comes out in the box set,

let me know!

 

 

 

13 thoughts on “How I Wrote An 80,000 Word Medical Thriller in 36 Days (The Gamma Sequence)

  1. Deadlines are so important for doing something aren’t they. I guess accountability is a great means of pressure…I am impressed but also inspired (but to do this I need my family to cooperate and getting up too early isn’t in the books nor going to bed late)

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    • What motivates me?

      I suppose I hate seeing that it’s about to be summertime and I have not published a new book this year – or for 9 months. Do I want to publish a book a year? Will that give me 20 books in 20 years – if I stick with it? Will I be happy only having 3-5 books out after five years?

      No.

      I want my goal to be 2-3 books published per year, so that I can build some momentum with readers – and that won’t happen if I don’t make 3 per year a goal and set a structure up to achieve it.

      I look at being able to put out X titles in a year, and that means I have to avoid excuses and get it done. I’m trying to now focus on writing a series or possibly two, and in order to do that I have to start, and they have to come in relatively rapid succession.

      I also like to challenge myself. When I was in an online critique group, I could put out 2000 to 3000 words once or twice a week, or about 5000 words in a week. But that meant it would take a year for me to write my book. That wasn’t good enough. I pushed myself to write two or 3000 words a day, 15 or 20,000 words over two weeks, and try to find some kind of happy balance in there. I wrote a 5000 word short story in one day and it was absolutely one of my favorite stories. So I know I can do it when I push myself. The question is, WILL I push myself to do it? And after a while, 2000 is a routine and you’re not really pushing yourself anymore. It’s a habit. It’s something you can do all the time, but you have to build up to it. I couldn’t have done that five or six years ago and I don’t pretend otherwise. So as long as I’m capable of doing it, I probably should – but as I mentioned, I kind of overdid it this time so maybe giving myself 90 days for a first draft is more palatable overall.

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  2. Amy particular review link you would like me to use? I usually got right to Amazon. Catch me quick before the chills subside! LOL!

    The Gamma Sequence Beta reader.

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    • It’s not on Amazon yet. We had to get all the beta comments folded in first. It will be there in a week or two.

      You should still have my email address so I will follow up with you after it publishes. Very soon! Keep the chills going!

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