Attention, COPS and NURSES: HELP!

img_2351-3I have a little murder mystery I’m writing, and I need a little input in a few places.

I’m more than 52,500 words deep in it, but there are things to be corrected before I finish.

For example, NURSE friends,

a detective heads to the emergency room late at night to make sure she doesn’t have a broken ankle. She has to get a few stitches, maybe an x-ray, but…

would you read the scene and tell me what rooms they go to and what’s involved?

POLICE OFFICER friends and detective story enthusiasts:

I have the stuff written, but I need to know things like:

  • How do cops (specifically detectives) refer to their guns? Service weapons? That’s what they say on the news, but if cops internally say something different, your insights would be helpful.
  • Do they carry their guns around inside the station?
  • What type of gun do they typically carry? (Tampa PD website and new stories indicate they used to carry 9mm Glocks and are switching to a 9mm Seg.)

I may have a few other questions for you, so any input is helpful!

If you want to help, please CONTACT ME and send your help in!





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International bestselling author Dan Alatorre has 17 titles published in over a dozen languages. From Romance in Poggibonsi to action and adventure in the sci-fi thriller The Navigators, to comedies like Night Of The Colonoscopy: A Horror Story (Sort Of) and the heartwarming and humorous anecdotes about parenting in the popular Savvy Stories series, his knack for surprising audiences and making you laugh or cry - or hang onto the edge of your seat - has been enjoyed by audiences around the world. And you are guaranteed to get a page turner every time. “That’s my style,” Dan says. “Grab you on page one and then send you on a roller coaster ride, regardless of the story or genre.” Readers agree, making his string of #1 bestsellers popular across the globe. He will make you chuckle or shed tears, sometimes on the same page. His novels always contain twists and turns, and his nonfiction will stay in your heart forever. Dan resides in the Tampa area with his wife and daughter. You can find him blogging away almost every day on www.DanAlatorre or watch his hilarious YouTube show every week Writers Off Task With Friends. Dan’s marketing book 25 eBook Marketing Tips You Wish You Knew has been a valuable tool for new authors (it’s free if you subscribe to his newsletter) and his dedication to helping other authors is evident in his helpful blog.

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