Can You Stand EVEN MORE Beta Love For Navs???

Hey, with feedback this good, you gotta share it! – Dan

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Hi Dan,

I finished The Navigators yesterday and wanted to send my thoughts.

First of all, great read!

TheNavigatorsDanAlatorreIt was a book that I read mostly on the Metro Train (commuter train) to and from work. At the end of my trip, either arriving to work or arriving home,

I truly did not want to stop reading!

I loved the way the book jumped into the story. I enjoy books that don’t have pages and pages of descriptions, setting the scene, and you started the story off with action and dialogue. I did have a hard time keeping Barry and Roger straight but after two chapters, it became more evident as their characters developed.

One of my favorite parts of the book was when (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER). Great humor! I loved this!

Then there were times when I had to put the book down as my eyes started to tear up:

When (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER).

And when (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER).

Both of these moments were well written and touched my emotions. Enjoyed having this as it continued to bring me into the story.

I liked the way Barry (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER). Kept the reader engaged with “conversation” as compared to all narrative. (Page 154)

I enjoyed the way Melissa’s (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER) and set the record straight on how everyone needed to (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER). I kept wondering what would happen to the time machine as it was (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER). Way to keep me on edge. Then to have SPOILER and her Dad purposely (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER) – good idea! And to have it (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER) after he shut it down, serves him right!

Great finish as I love happy endings! You did a terrific job wrapping everything up nice and tight. I like this as compared to items being left undone.

Overall Dan,

a terrific read, and as a reader, I will search for more of your books.

Very well written and the pace was good. At no point did I feel like I was ready to leave the book. It kept me engaged and was a nice steady stream of action and dialogue.

Very well done!

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Before you smarties say, “Wow, your mom really liked your book,” it  wasn’t my mom.

It was my sister.

– Dan

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