Can You Stand EVEN MORE Beta Love For Navs???

Hey, with feedback this good, you gotta share it! – Dan

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Hi Dan,

I finished The Navigators yesterday and wanted to send my thoughts.

First of all, great read!

TheNavigatorsDanAlatorreIt was a book that I read mostly on the Metro Train (commuter train) to and from work. At the end of my trip, either arriving to work or arriving home,

I truly did not want to stop reading!

I loved the way the book jumped into the story. I enjoy books that don’t have pages and pages of descriptions, setting the scene, and you started the story off with action and dialogue. I did have a hard time keeping Barry and Roger straight but after two chapters, it became more evident as their characters developed.

One of my favorite parts of the book was when (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER). Great humor! I loved this!

Then there were times when I had to put the book down as my eyes started to tear up:

When (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER).

And when (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER).

Both of these moments were well written and touched my emotions. Enjoyed having this as it continued to bring me into the story.

I liked the way Barry (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER). Kept the reader engaged with “conversation” as compared to all narrative. (Page 154)

I enjoyed the way Melissa’s (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER) and set the record straight on how everyone needed to (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER). I kept wondering what would happen to the time machine as it was (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER). Way to keep me on edge. Then to have SPOILER and her Dad purposely (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER) – good idea! And to have it (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER) after he shut it down, serves him right!

Great finish as I love happy endings! You did a terrific job wrapping everything up nice and tight. I like this as compared to items being left undone.

Overall Dan,

a terrific read, and as a reader, I will search for more of your books.

Very well written and the pace was good. At no point did I feel like I was ready to leave the book. It kept me engaged and was a nice steady stream of action and dialogue.

Very well done!

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Before you smarties say, “Wow, your mom really liked your book,” it  wasn’t my mom.

It was my sister.

– Dan

Published by Dan Alatorre AUTHOR

International bestselling author Dan Alatorre has 17 titles published in over a dozen languages. From Romance in Poggibonsi to action and adventure in the sci-fi thriller The Navigators, to comedies like Night Of The Colonoscopy: A Horror Story (Sort Of) and the heartwarming and humorous anecdotes about parenting in the popular Savvy Stories series, his knack for surprising audiences and making you laugh or cry - or hang onto the edge of your seat - has been enjoyed by audiences around the world. And you are guaranteed to get a page turner every time. “That’s my style,” Dan says. “Grab you on page one and then send you on a roller coaster ride, regardless of the story or genre.” Readers agree, making his string of #1 bestsellers popular across the globe. He will make you chuckle or shed tears, sometimes on the same page. His novels always contain twists and turns, and his nonfiction will stay in your heart forever. Dan resides in the Tampa area with his wife and daughter. You can find him blogging away almost every day on www.DanAlatorre or watch his hilarious YouTube show every week Writers Off Task With Friends. Dan’s marketing book 25 eBook Marketing Tips You Wish You Knew has been a valuable tool for new authors (it’s free if you subscribe to his newsletter) and his dedication to helping other authors is evident in his helpful blog.

6 thoughts on “Can You Stand EVEN MORE Beta Love For Navs???

  1. Fantastic review. Loved the reader’s excitement. Can’t help being drawn in more than by a usual review. The SPOILER-SPOILERs promise delicious elements one must find out for him or herself. Well done. 😀

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