I’m big on immersion. To me, un-immersing your reader from your story is the cardinal sin. This post explains some of that. Enjoy!
I saw a Facebook post recently that asked the question, “What mistakes did you make in your early writings?” Naturally, I offered an honest answer. In past scribbling, I was guilty of “distancing” my readers from my characters. However, I have since learned how to close the gap between reader and character.
What Are Distancing Phrases?
You create distance by telling what the character saw, as opposed to letting the reader see through the character’s eyes. Instead of listing every possible manner of distancing and its fix, I’ve decided to write a small paragraph which displays distancing. Yes, I know there’s an element of the old Show vs. Tell going on here, but I’m concentrating on the relationship between reader and character.
This Is True for Filmmaking as Well
Remember the last time you watched a well-made film? You were completely immersed into the world and characters presented to you…
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