10 Thoughts You Need To Hear About ME

  1. OMG! Thanks so much for your extremely detailed critique. It is so valuable and I’ll definitely be going over it (several times, I’d say) to add in all those emotional flavors you so rightly suggest. Thank you again for all the kind words that came through along with the suggestions.

– HH


2. Great stuff! Just the sort of thing that I wanted.

– RR


3. Thanks Dan!! That was so helpful!!




4. Thank you so much, Dan, for the crit. It was excellent… It has been amazing to get a crit like this. Thank you once again and I look forward to the next Word Weavers.




5. Thank you so much for taking the time to look at and read my story. Your kindness and consideration is amazing. We need more authors like you! <3




6. I can’t thank you enough for your suggestions. It is a pleasure learning with you!




7. Hi, Dan. Wow! You deliver a great critique! You gave me some excellent feedback with which to improve and I’m very grateful.  I like your tone and the bit of humor too.



8. Thank you for the fantastic critique…but omg…Thank You!!! Your critique style is just really, fantastically great. 🙂 I’ve participated in quite a few swaps in the past, some good, and a few that really ripped me apart and made me want to not continue. I like that you comment about things that do work along with stuff that’s meh.




9. I did want you to know how much I appreciated the critique. To get the in-line critique from you is absolutely wonderful, and so encouraging!!



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10: THESE are just some of the actual comments I received from critiques I did in my April writing Contest.  The first 25 story entries in my July  Word Weaver Writing Contest get the same helpful critique analysis. 


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International bestselling author Dan Alatorre has 17 titles published in over a dozen languages. From Romance in Poggibonsi to action and adventure in the sci-fi thriller The Navigators, to comedies like Night Of The Colonoscopy: A Horror Story (Sort Of) and the heartwarming and humorous anecdotes about parenting in the popular Savvy Stories series, his knack for surprising audiences and making you laugh or cry - or hang onto the edge of your seat - has been enjoyed by audiences around the world. And you are guaranteed to get a page turner every time. “That’s my style,” Dan says. “Grab you on page one and then send you on a roller coaster ride, regardless of the story or genre.” Readers agree, making his string of #1 bestsellers popular across the globe. He will make you chuckle or shed tears, sometimes on the same page. His novels always contain twists and turns, and his nonfiction will stay in your heart forever. Dan resides in the Tampa area with his wife and daughter. You can find him blogging away almost every day on www.DanAlatorre or watch his hilarious YouTube show every week Writers Off Task With Friends. Dan’s marketing book 25 eBook Marketing Tips You Wish You Knew has been a valuable tool for new authors (it’s free if you subscribe to his newsletter) and his dedication to helping other authors is evident in his helpful blog.

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