One of my critique partners has closed in on the finish of Poggibonsi, my romantic comedy. He has these kind words to offer.
(Best. Critique. Ever.)
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“You, on the other hand, have a gift. The whole crazy story of marital angst, betrayal and reconciliation is spot on. The whole thing was a sleigh ride of emotion. Your characterization of Sam and Jullieta made me want to know them. It was good that you saved Mattie’s renewal (?) until the end. Til then I was not in her camp. Well done!
“Haven’t read the end yet but I’m sure it will be superb.”
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Loving me some critiques right now.
You’ll get your chance soon enough.
A few weeks for the critique partners to finish, a few weeks with beta readers, and Poggibonsi will be available. More on that later. I’m gonna go bask in the glow.
Dan Alatorre 
Way to go, Dan!
The end in neigh.
The book is AMAZING. I hope you congratulated yourself appropriately after posting that last chapter.
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Strangely, I became suddenly ill with the flu. Not a good sign, to be puking your guts out after posting your last chapter!
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I absolutely LOVE Poggibonsi!
You better get used to basking in the glow of compliments on this one.
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You are too kind. But keep it up.
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🙂
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Thanks, Linda!
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