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Living In Revision HELL

Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.) To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side […]

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You guys!!!!!

Check it out! According to Word press, we are on the cusp of reaching 2000 followers! Now, I have my doubts about the accuracy of that number, but any excuse to celebrate, right? So lets celebrate! But how? It was just a year ago – yes, just last February – we broached the 1000 follower […]

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Don’t Get EMOTIONAL! Okay, do. A lot.

Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.) To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side […]

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Do Overs. (And Over. And OVER!)

Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.)   Then give me your thoughts in the comment section. Do Overs Often in a first […]

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The Juggling Act That Is GREAT Storytelling

Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.) To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side […]

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Writing Body Language To “Show, Don’t Tell” (and definitely not LOOK)

This lesson is invaluable, so read carefully. Wait, does invaluable mean no value or lots of value? Quick internet search… Okay. Yeah, there’s gold in today’s lesson. Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons […]

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How To Trim Your Story To The Bone

Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.) To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side […]

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3 Tips For WRITING A Roller Coaster

Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.) To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side […]

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3 Ways You Are Ruining Your Story

Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.) To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side […]

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Every Once In A While, You Get It Right The First Time

This chapter’s pretty tight as is. A few tweaks and I’ll be happy.  . Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.) To view […]