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Early Praise For The Navigators

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As the beta readers work their way through my book, we are getting some really good reports! (Wanna be a beta? There’s still time. Click HERE.)

The Navigators is thrilling as h*ll.

“Didn’t think I would enjoy this book as much as I do, since I’m in for fantasy 9 out of 10. But The Navigators is thrilling as h*ll. Thank you for giving me this opportunity.”

A most enjoyable romp

“I’d scheduled two chapters a day, but got through it a lot quicker.”

Grabs you in chapter one and doesn’t let go

Think finding a time machine would be all fun and games? Think again. “The Navigators” is a shining example of what could go wrong. Well written, with characters you can relate to and adventures you will be glad you missed (like being stalked by a saber tooth tiger), Dan Alatorre grabs you in chapter one and doesn’t let go until the very end. You’ll be glad you spent the time to read this book. – Larry Rueschhoff, author of “Surviving the Fall”

There is something in here, something from the spirit of Isaak Asimov and all those days when I started reading science fiction.

It’s a beautiful story!! Beautiful! There is something in here, something from the spirit of Isaak Asimov and all those days when I started reading science fiction. Your story really teleported me back in those distant days. A real time machine!!

I think you are a true story teller, Dan. The writing is so clean, just bare bones story; nothing gets into its way, no words wasted. I noticed that from the very first time I read one of those chapters and I said it right then. And you kept the magic rolling all the way. You definitely strike something inside the reader.

Keep going! You should really think of continuation of The Navigators.

Until later,

Art Jeffries, Author of “The Collector”

You still have time to be a beta reader and help create a successful launch to The Navigators! Click HERE and get your Advance Review Copy now!

28 replies on “Early Praise For The Navigators”

As a name by itself, it’s cool. Neat font and all that.

As an advertisement for the guy who wrote the story, it’s not. Too dark, too frilly/hard to read, too easily lost on the page.

Maybe plainer: Times New Roman font, black, possibly bold. Even then it’d get lost on the page. Black across the orange top, with the image moved down? Now that would work… but then the bottom might be too plain!

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I am at chapter 20. Oh my gosh! so much has happened in these 20 chapters. I HATE Findley! I’m so disappointed in Tomas. Will Barry and Melissa just get together for crying out loud?

It’s really good so far!!!

On Fri, May 27, 2016 at 4:01 AM, Dan Alatorre – AUTHOR wrote:

> Dan Alatorre AUTHOR posted: ” As the beta readers work their way through > my book, we are getting some really good reports! (Wanna be a beta? There’s > still time. Click HERE.) The Navigators is thrilling as h*ll. “Didn’t think > I would enjoy this book as much as I do, since I’m in for ” >

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I’m on chapter 15. I read it before but like this version better, it’s a bit fleshed out even though there’s so much action it never drags. I think the characters are well written and the plot is NOT predictable which is good because there’s nothing more frustrating than figuring out a plot in the first few chapters.

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I’m up to Chapter 18 and just wanted to let you know I’ve mentioned you and your work in my new blog post on ‘What I am Working On’ which is a series outlining what I do creatively each week. The beta read had to be in there of course! 🙂 Come by and take a look! http://goo.gl/4q3L9L

J.H. Winter
Ink & Stitches – http://blog.jhwinter.com

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Thank you, Dan! Looking forward to revealing the finished illustration soon! Past page 100 in The Navigators last night. Findlay is evil and things are getting interesting with Tomas. I’ll have to read more to find out what happens!

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