Recently, a friend received the comments from her editor, which she reluctantly shared with me after I pried the wrist-bound razor blade from her hand.
Yes, it was harsh in places – but not necessarily inaccurate in some of its suggestions. And to think she paid for the privilege of being told she is unworthy to walk the Earth as anything more than a Costco employee. (Hey, nothing against Costco; they get holidays off.)
In fact, I liked some of the ideas put forth in the Editor Letter. But I thought a lot of it was borderline boilerplate and could be said about any book and the author would agree.
Like I could tell 100% of writers it needs some tightening and in some places they need to improve the pace. 100% would agree.
Until your story is edited to 3 words long, everyone will agree it can be tighter.
Three words: They all died.
TIGHTER!
Everybody died.
You’ve just been EditorLettered.
Consider an alternate ending.
Two words. Everybody survived.
Romeo and Juliet in 3 words: Almost everyone dies.
Maybe that should be a flash fiction challenge. Take your favorite book and EditorLetter it to 3 words.
Bridges Of Madison County, EditorLettered to 3 words: he leaves her
Could be tighter: she cheated
The editor goes crazy. Emails back: “I love that. Could be tighter, though. Can we improve the pace just a little more?”
Cheater
BINGO!
This is the future of American literature. Postage stamp books.
Twitter’s too long. Who has time for a 144-character story?
Not me! I’m too busy ordering skinny coffee drinks! (See Unimpressed Shark 2 post)
Cover to cover faster than you can microwave a burrito, that’s the new author’s goal.
Adverbs are already taboo. Adjectives can’t be far behind. And articles? Please. Don’t get me started.
American-ese needs to go article free. Like the Indians did in westerns.
Me hunt. You go.
Perfection.
And who needs proper nouns?
Complete waste of time
In fact, nouns in general are probably offense to somebody these days. He? She? We can go tighter.
Let’s just use E.
And since E is now for everyone, we don’t need it at all.
Hunt. Go.
Works fine.
I think we’re *this close* to inventing a new language. One based on single letters and the occasional emoji.
Grunting may return. Maybe the cave men were onto something. Like the paleo diet, we need a paleo language. Just grunts and basic emojis.
Emojis = modern-day hieroglyphics
No need for words at all. Everybody can just shut the fuck up. I’d prefer that, actually.
Our future will be run with emojis and gifs
I was thinking this could be a blog post but it kinda went off in a weird direction.
When did it veer away from blog post material?
Good point.
I mean,
FLASH FICTION CHALLENGE:
YOUR FAVORITE STORY IN 3 WORDS
Embrace the new reality.
38 replies on “Flash Fiction Challenge: The Editor Letter”
Okay here we go – Pratchett’s Reaper Man in three words – Death is awesome.
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Hmm. Nice job. I wonder if we can improve the pace at all?
Maybe: awesome death?
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Or even better – Death!! (the double exclamation mark implies awesomeness. Maybe.)
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Now you’re catching on. But just one exclamation point or we’ll have an echo.
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The echo is for dramatic effect. But I see your point.
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On second glance, that’s still a lot of letters… Can we go with an emoji? Maybe a smiley face with X’s for eyes and his tongue sticking out?
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Ugh. Emojis. But, hey, if you insist! 😉
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Hmm…every story in some way:
War and Peace
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Hmm. I want to skim. Can we tighten that up a little? “And” is so blah and peace is boring. Traders want drama. Let’s go with just War.
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🙂
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Brilliant!
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Julius Ceaser = everyone killed him.
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Tough to tighten that!
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Everyone guilty?
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They aren’t all good. Just brief.
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This doesn’t work, some people want more sex in their books and that can’t be done tastefully in three words! (mentioning no names!)
How about…
“The condom split.” In any politically correct book you like?!
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Baby.
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‘Syphilis’ has more tension and could go either way!
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Good call.
VD is tighter.
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I don’t even want to write a three-word story. I just want to read, over and over again: “No need for words at all. Everybody can just shut the fuck up. I’d prefer that, actually. Our future will be run with emojis and gifs.”
Or maybe I just REALLY need that second cup of coffee.
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Make sure it has two tablespoons of sarcasm and serve it cold!
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Caffeine has been downloaded and sufficient RAM has been restored, so here goes:
Gone With the Wind
“Tomorrow’s another day.”
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Welcome back. I think we can go tighter. Gone with the wind. Tomorrow’s another day.
Hmm.
“Blew It”
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Not my favourite book, but the only one that came of mind.
Flowers in the Attic.
Incest sucks
I loved the beginning blurb by the way.
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Hard to top that! Nice work!
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Can I do women’s magazines?
Sex and Desserts
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Is that like at the same time? Might not want to shorten that.
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That’s why I opted for that very valuable 3rd word….
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Tough call but you scored.
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If I get a few more words I can write a Danielle Steele novel formula.
Woman + father figure + life drama + starting over = love
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Like we said you’ve been EditorLettered, DanielleSteeleize that story.
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The Jungle: Avoid the Sausage
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Same with Soylent Green.
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Let’s just cut to the chase. All stories end the same, so let’s simply whittle down the story to two words: The End. For those with sequels: Will Continue.
There then is the end of all tomes, opium (plural of opus), and epics. Circle the word that doesn’t fit in the previous sentence (a tangential exercise).
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my favorite story:
love
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Hard to improve on that!
Unless…
❤
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In keeping with the spirit of your post…I loved it, it was hilarious! Oh wait…I mean…LOL!
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🙂
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