Writing Better Stories, part 2

Yesterday we looked at a story a friend had written https://danalatorre.com/?p=784&preview=true&preview_id=784   that was good but wasn’t grabbing me, and after some analysis I figured out why. In that post, we discussed its wordiness. Today we continue with my analysis. (Occasionally I’ll share a story critique here that I think will benefit all writers. We … Continue reading Writing Better Stories, part 2